Friday, September 11, 2009

Antacdote 1

My uncle was a us government official who would go to other countries and gather intelligence being away for weeks at a time. He always would complete what they assigned him no matter the conditions or what he had to do. He would be away from his family and friends but he would always go back and wouldnt quit.
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3 comments:

  1. DarianSeptember 12, 2009 at 3:25 PM

    im really confused. if you put more detail, i think it would be more interesting and less confusing. but its a good choice. im excited to see the final draft.

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  2. GabySeptember 12, 2009 at 9:32 PM

    i like the story on your uncle but it sound kinda like its only a portion of the story i think you should longate the story but other wise its a good story

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  3. M0NiCASeptember 18, 2009 at 12:55 PM

    i would like to start my bio, can you comment them now?

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